Talk:UN's Convention on Domestic Workers expected to take effect in 2013

Headline
Should use downstyle capitalization (like a sentence, rather than like a title). --Pi zero (talk) 05:56, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1617350 [Not ready]
{{peer_reviewed|revid=1617350|copyright=n/a|newsworthy=pass|verifiable=n/a|npov=n/a|style=3 sentences/3 paragraphs|reviewer=Bddpaux|comments=An excellent start to what I'm confident will be an excellent article. However, the 2nd paragraph consists only of two sentences. The 3rd paragraphs consists of only 1 very long sentence. Generally speaking, the lede needs to be stated in somewhat simpler terms. "[...} after the Philippines deposited its ratification of the convention [...]"- -that's probably some sort of Euro-English turn of phrase, but for a red-blooded American fellow like m'self, I'm left scratching my head as to what that REALLY MEANS. Good work on Wiki'fying so many terms!! --Bddpaux (talk) 22:21, 8 September 2012 (UTC)|time=22:21, 8 September 2012 (UTC)}}