Talk:US Capitol lockdown lifted after shooting

Review of revision 3389627 [Not ready]
How is this not acceptable? nothing is plagiarized, i cited my sources and its relevant it happened 45 minuets ago?? how do i change the article headline without making a new page?? Jverwey (talk) 19:19, 11 April 2015 (UTC)

questions?
How is this not acceptable? nothing is plagiarized, i cited my sources and its relevant it happened 45 minuets ago?? how do i change the article headline without making a new page??Jverwey (talk) 19:24, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
 * You change the headline by renaming the article. At the top of your browser window when viewing the article, on the control bar at the top over on the right there should be a dropdown menu with just one item on it, which is to rename the article.  --Pi zero (talk) 20:52, 11 April 2015 (UTC)

questions?
i would like to get this published sometime soon as its very relative ! hand i don't want someone to write an article then mine get scraped Jverwey (talk) 20:13, 11 April 2015 (UTC)

Publishable ??
is this publishable now ? i think i have changed everything to your liking and standards.
 * Now it gets reviewed, and we'll see. --Pi zero (talk) 22:20, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
 * okay, well does it look like it will pass to you ?? Jverwey (talk) 22:25, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm only guessing, but, my guess is it would have passed. --Pi zero (talk) 22:29, 11 April 2015 (UTC)

Review of revision 3389901 [Not ready]

 * To be clear: at least one source says the lockdown has been lifted, which requires changes to the lede and headline.  --Pi zero (talk) 22:39, 11 April 2015 (UTC)

NOW?
how does it look now ? I've updated everythingJverwey (talk) 23:00, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Subject obviously to the rigorous review, it looks good to me.
 * (Please do keep in mind, I'm a volunteer. I contribute an unreasonable amount of my time to Wikinews because I care.)  --Pi zero (talk) 23:13, 11 April 2015 (UTC)

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i would like to have it published sometime tonight, so i don't have to re write it again and again and keep making it relative. thank you.Jverwey (talk) 23:59, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Review is collaboration with the writer; that's the first pillar at WN:Pillars of Wikinews writing. The more pleasant reviewers find collaboration with you, the more they'll be motivated to review your articles.  --Pi zero (talk) 00:40, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Im just figuring out all this stuff, sorry if i come off as rude or pushy, i just thought it was a good article ! hope to get it published soon! thanks for your help today. Jverwey (talk) 00:47, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm probably a bit grouchy myself (rough day irl). I do understand you're really trying to make this work.  (I'm a little worried about copyright atm as I start looking at this text... but I mean to be thorough about this, and if the problem is small enough for me to just fix, I certainly will.)  --Pi zero (talk) 01:19, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
 * Awesome, I've seen that you changed a view things. hows it looking like it on your end ?? Jverwey (talk) 01:27, 12 April 2015 (UTC)

plagiarism rewrite
Hi Pi Zero, I've rewritten the article.