Talk:US state of Florida assumes control of Disney World's self-governing district

@Heavy Water, if you get some time, check this article. I thought you will have a review on it when you renamed the page. M:DRC (talk) 15:42, 1 March 2023 (UTC)


 * I probably will soon here. It was too late then. Heavy Water (talk) 15:45, 1 March 2023 (UTC)

NPOV & style
"wife of [the] state Republican Party chairman" What's his name? "The private-administration entity may also earn money" first of all, is private-administration re: the self-governing district, or the state government board? 'May' as in empowered to, or as in 'might'? "rising congressional success for a governor"??? Eh? "ability to bridge cultural and political differences". Nuance this, please. Also smaller grammar issues, formatting, ordering of paragraphs &c. JJLiu112 (talk) 16:08, 1 March 2023 (UTC)


 * @JJLiu112, I will see to it and changed it as possible. M:DRC (talk) 17:23, 1 March 2023 (UTC)