Talk:Woman slashed to death, man steals $6 for beer

help on this article will help as well thanks before it gets to become stale news. --MelloYelloHead (talk) 17:46, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I've given it a rewrite, let me know what you think. Any changes or corrections are of course welcome. -- Friskymuffin (talk) 19:18, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Pic anyone? --72.73.79.153 19:31, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I can't seem to find any round the net, it's not a very major story after all. -- Friskymuffin (talk) 19:33, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

review and pic?
do you think the review will be passed? and a pic of florida or something where this happened? --72.73.79.153 19:34, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
 * looks great nice pic ty hopefully will pass. --72.73.79.153 19:44, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

citation for witness would be nice
citation for witness saying "he has a rule — if he finds someone in the house during a burglary, he has to kill them" would be nice. Kushal one (talk) 00:44, 1 October 2008 (UTC)