Thread:Comments:California campus pepper spray police suspended/Headline change/reply (3)

I am the original author of this article and I think Brian McNeil was right to change its title. In retrospect, my original title was a bit vague as "Police officers put on leave after pepper spraying protesters" gives you no information about where the incident took place, or that students were being pepper sprayed. "California campus pepper spray police suspended" is a better title because it includes the two things I forgot to put in and it makes a pretty neat use of alliteration. So thank you for the improved title, Brian.

Viriditas, I totally disagree with all of your allegations. The headline change has not distorted the information at all. If anything, it has actually made the information more precise.