Thread:Comments:Collingwood and St. Kilda draw 2010 AFL Grand Final/Comments from feedback form - "Before Jarryd Blair kicked the..."

Before Jarryd Blair kicked the goal, Collingwood was still leading. St Kilda should not have a dot point (.) after "St". The paragraphs are too fragmented. Not enough references. There should be capitals for qualifying and preliminary finals unless they are specific like the "1st Preliminary Final". The placement of the box underneath the Collingwood guernsey is out of place.