Thread:Comments:State-run bus crashes in Cuba en route to Havana, killing seven/State-run bus crashes in Cuba en route to Havana, killing seven/reply (3)

Nothing is wrong with the article content as it stands. There are multiple ways to say and not everyone is going to stick to your recommendations. "Avoid unnecessary words" is what one should try to achieve. But they should also avoid BS, so well wrapping this with a word of notice for peers: DFTT.