Thread:Comments:Syrian citizen journalists risk death, targeted; city of Homs facing starvation/Comments from feedback form - "Even though the style is still..."/reply

With the amount of work that went into copyediting and reviewing DragonFire1024's first submission in quite some time, I'm keen to know where you see "iffy" stylistic points.

A look at the edit history will show ~100 edits between review submission and publication.