User talk:Ĉiuĵaŭde

-- 03:09, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

On Thursday, between 10:45 a.m. and 11:15 a.m., shootings occured at two military facilities in Chattanooga, Tennessee. Four U.S. marines were killed and three other people, including an officer, were wounded. The gunman was killed at the site of the second shooting. The two sites are a U.S. Navy recruitment center and a Marine Reserve Center.

Shootings at two military facilities in Chattanooga
Hi. I looked over the article and found some problems, which I've described in my review comments. (I'd have liked to review it sooner, but with one thing and other... well. I always feel bad when an article takes a while to review, and have to keep reminding myself not to apologize since that only brings trouble on an all-volunteer project.)  Any questions, feel free to ask. --Pi zero (talk) 17:55, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
 * When you believe it's ready, remember to resubmit for review. --Pi zero (talk) 19:22, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
 * I feel bad I didn't look more closely at this when I saw last night that it'd been resubmitted. I was admittedly too tired for a full review at that time, but, in retrospect, the problems are things I could have spotted then.  Review comments. A first article for Wikinews is generally a struggle, because there are so many simple things that can go wrong that are easy to avoid once one knows about them, but the first time through one doesn't yet know about them.  (This is one reason I'm very hopeful that an interactive article wizard may make first-time Wikinews article writing lots easier... though I'm very aware that developing such a wizard won't be easy.)  --Pi zero (talk) 17:45, 21 July 2015 (UTC)