User talk:211.28.152.44

Thanks for starting the article!
That's a good start for the article, but it's not quite ready for the main page as a published article, so I moved it to the Developing stories on the main page so people can help expand it. Check out the talk page where I have left some ideas on elements of the article which need attention. - Amgine/talk 05:19, 16 May 2005 (UTC)