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South Sudanese President Salva Kiir signs peace deal
Thanks for pitching in to help. I get the point about choppy sentences; on the other hand, I was hesitant about the sentence-blending generally, as it subtly changed the meaning and long sentences aren't good news style either. I did publish the last blend directly, as the ideas seemed naturally connected. --Pi zero (talk) 21:27, 27 August 2015 (UTC)