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-- Cirt (talk) 14:28, 17 October 2012 (UTC)

How did Gaddafi die?
Hi. As a random aside here, How did Gaddafi die? does not establish the newsworthiness in the first paragraph. Also, the title is not an active voice title that establishes newsworthiness. The article dating format is not compliant with the local manual of style. This should be addressed. There are four images, none of which have the photographer properly credited. These are things will need to be addressed before the article goes to review because they will hold up a review. --LauraHale (talk) 11:40, 21 October 2012 (UTC)