User talk:Anirudh Emani

The review process
You wrote: "I Have tried my hardest, in my vies, i have scored only 50% to this page. i am New to Wikinews however."

You don't need to score your own article. (The "What do you think of this page?" feedback form is for readers.)

All you needed to do when you decided you were finished was to click the "change" button in the blue box at the top of the article. (If you try your hardest but you don't think an article is ready to be published, then just ask for help at the water cooler - the link is on the left.)

Welcome to Wikinews!

--InfantGorilla (talk) 10:26, 23 September 2010 (UTC)

Malakas
I reviewed your article, which I renamed Tropical storm Malakas strengthening, approaching Iwo Jima.

Unfortunately I failed the article and hope you are able to improve it. As you are new here, I repeat my review comment below:


 * Despite your hard work, [my opinion is] that the article is a rewrite of a single source. To write genuinely independent news, you need to read at least two independent articles, make a note of the facts you want to include from each, and write a new article from scratch.  Otherwise you lose your neutrality, and can offend the author of the original article.

I hope that helps.

--InfantGorilla (talk) 10:36, 23 September 2010 (UTC)