User talk:Anonymous101/Obama claims victory in US Presidential elections

This story is horribly written and confusing. It needs a serious rewrite, starting with the title, which implies that Obama claimed victory in the general election, without making mention of the primary. Shoddy and misleading.
 * It isn't published yet, this must be fixed first as the notice at the top says. --Brian McNeil / talk 08:44, 4 June 2008 (UTC)