User talk:Borgmcklorg

-- 11:16, 25 August 2011 (UTC)

Strauss-Kahn case dismissed
Hi. A few remarks about how this has gone; Wikinews can take some acclimating to. --Pi zero (talk) 14:54, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Substantive changes are only allowed to an article for the first 24 hours after publication. After that, only a few kinds of changes are permitted.
 * I'm displeased that the existing lede uses the word shocking, which is POV; but that got by us.
 * The lede of a Wikinews article is not like the first paragraph of a Wikipedia article. The lede should succinctly answer as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about the news event that is the focus of the article; that annoying word shocking is the only problem I see with the current lede.