User talk:Bowie505

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 02:14, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

FIFA ethics committee recommends lifetime ban of former FIFA vice-president
Hi. This is an interesting (small, of course) item; but on review there were some difficulties which I hope can be cleared up. See my review comments; also of interest, . --Pi zero (talk) 17:51, 5 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Published. Congrats!  Review comments.  --Pi zero (talk) 13:26, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

FIFA conditionally lifts Benin suspension
Hello, there! I saw the article in the list of articles to be reviewed. But the article has some problems with the style, and also under minimal-WN:LENGTH. I tried to address some issues according to style guide, but the article would not be able to pass. The biggest problem is freshness. The event took place four days ago. Though one news source is three-days-old, I fear this article is now stale. acagastya 07:32, 8 June 2016 (UTC)