User talk:Brianna Hames

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 01:18, 10 December 2014 (UTC)

Please read review comments
You have submitted the article 2014 Division 1 AAAA State Champions for review three times now. It has been reviewed twice, once by User:Pi zero and the second time by me. The comments we left are on Talk:2014 Division 1 AAAA State Champions. In summary:


 * There is no focal event for the story.
 * There is no sourcing or reporters notes for the story.
 * The page title is not in a correct format: Wikinews articles should be written like headlines.
 * The article does not give enough context about the event to inform a reader not already familiar with the topic.
 * The images are broken.
 * The vast majority of the article is taken up with extended lists.

Please be sure to read Pillars of Wikinews writing and try to write in a news style and fix the other issues laid out with the article before submitting it for review again. If you have any questions or need any assistance, feel free to ask on my talk page. —Tom Morris (talk) 03:12, 10 December 2014 (UTC)