User talk:Cap. Cold

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 04:09, 24 June 2017 (UTC)

Unidentified corpse found in street in Ikotun, Lagos
Hello, Cap. Cold! There are a couple of problems with the article. Currently, it is just below the minimal length. We need three medium sized-paragraphs. So if you could add a couple of paragraphs of relevant information, it would solve the problem. The other problem is: you did not cite any sources. If there are no sources, the article can not be reviewed. Please find two independent news sources which can confirm this story. It can be the source from where you came to know about this. Else, you can search on the internet about this story, find a couple of independent sources, add two paragraphs and submit the article. Don't worry of the Failed Review template. It is scary, but you can always improve the article and re-submit it Currently, I am here to review it. Good luck!

PS: Just in case you wanted to read what Style Guide has to say about the article length or sources. acagastya 08:59, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for adding the paragraph (but we need one more), but you have to cite the sources. I see you have added title of the sources, but without the URL, I can not see which sources you have used. Add the URLs, I will handle the rest. But do not add unofficial blogs as the source. acagastya 09:23, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Publishing website is not the URL, you know. acagastya 10:18, 26 June 2017 (UTC)

Hi. We need working links to the particular source articles used. Also, I'm not sure what to think about that second source site. I remarked about these things in my review comments. (Btw, if you haven't looked at WN:WRITE yet, you might find it helpful.) --Pi zero (talk) 11:15, 26 June 2017 (UTC)