User talk:CharlieWin

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 12:13, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

Concerns for health damage rise following the National Pollutant Inventory
Hello. There are multiple issues with the article. Please use the date as specified in the WN:SG (for example, April 5, 2017). The article should follow the style guide. Three out of four news sources are more than three days old. We need two independent sources to confirm the event. The headlines should say something unique about the story. Note that wikinews is for the global audience. The lede should answer all the 5Ws and Hs questions and the article's structure should be like that of an inverted pyramid: that is, more important information is available at the top, and lesser important/secondary data should be in the lower part of the article. You might want to read how to write an article. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Acagastya (talk • contribs) 08:01, 5 April 2017

UoW student?
Are you a UoW student? --Pi zero (talk) 20:17, 7 April 2017 (UTC)