User talk:Cyfraw

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 05:44, 6 December 2012 (UTC)

Tunisian ex-president's son-in-law arrested in Seychelles
Hi. I've assessed the article in its current form not-ready for publication. Please see the review comments, and.

The first article is generally the hardest, because the new contributor is on their way up our notoriously steep initial learning curve; steep but short, after which it gets much easier to write basic articles, though of course we all hope never to stop improving. Often a first article doesn't achieve publish-quality before it looses freshness, which could easily happen here since the article was already two days old, now in its third; sometimes an article can be refreshed with new developments. --Pi zero (talk) 01:00, 17 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Hi again. Unfortunately, the story isn't fresh anymore.  New developments could make it possible to refocus and thereby refresh the article.  See review comments.  (I feel bad that I wasn't able to check over your changes to see whether they fixed the other problems; but, honestly, I already struggle to find as much time as I can to donate to Wikinews.)  --Pi zero (talk) 14:40, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Never mind, I will try next time to create a new article that is fresh. Thanks for your ideas!. --Cyfraw (talk) 09:21, 31 December 2012 (UTC)