User talk:DMcGookinUOW

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Missouri Teacher suing State over the breaking of the First Amendment
The above submission needs work if you intend to try and save it from being deleted as stale. It should follow the inverse pyramid format for layout; it should answer as many of the Five Ws as possible in the lede, and it should not assume that readers know the story background. --Brian McNeil / talk 11:45, 30 August 2011 (UTC)

Wikimedians to the Games
Hi. :) As you're an Australian contributor, I thought you might be interested in Wikimedians to the Games, which is an opportunity to cover the Paralympic Games as a member of the press. As you've experience writing Wikinews articles, this should give you a leg up. :)  LauraHale (talk) 08:34, 31 December 2011 (UTC)