User talk:Dan23452767645

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 22:26, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikinews, Dan23452767645. --Gryllida (chat) 23:10, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

Re: First day of the new Welsh rail franchise‎
Hello Dan23452767645,

Thanks a lot for implementing the comments at the talk page of the article.

I added a couple new sections.

Please check. --Gryllida (chat) 00:14, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

Did you mean to re-submit for review? It looks like it was submitted once but then moved back to develop. --Gryllida (chat) 02:23, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
 * The dailypost source seems to be paywalled, if I am not mistaken it needs to be replaced with another source. Left a remark about this at the article talk page also. If I understand correctly, this needs to be fixed before submitting the story for review. --Gryllida (chat) 02:57, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
 * This was a mistake, the source appears to be working. Added images, edited for past tense, and submitted for review. --Gryllida (chat) 03:35, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi,

Must have fallen to sleep last night, thanks for sorting that out. My last edit was at 3am my time.

Dan Dan23452767645 (talk) 07:31, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

Re: Transport for Wales
Hello Dan23452767645,

This story is now stale as remarked in the last review. The issues raised were past tense in article body (fixed); headline in active voice and present tense (fixed); plagiarism and connection between different paragraphs (not fixed because it was too late to write by then). Some of these may help you with writing the next story.

It has in any case been a great pleasure to write together, by sharing suggestions and writing it into the article. :) Even though the article was not published, I am still glad about what we did.

I'm keen to keep looking for new developments in the area. As I am not strongly familiar with it however I may need your advice. Are there any particular news sources -- websites, TV or radio -- which you would recommend me to bookmark, about Wales or about transport in United Kingdom, which are more relevant and more interesting compared to others? I am hoping you could possibly share a part of your daily news reading list.

Cheers, --Gryllida (chat) 04:56, 22 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Darn shame, too. Sorry, we have a work cycle like any other place! Any way you can back up, take a breath, and submit something fresh?? --Bddpaux (talk) 16:32, 23 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the comments. Sorry about the delay in getting back to you. It's a shame that it wasn't done in time, but nevermind. It's not all lost however, I have learnt a lot about how to write good articles from it. I live in the UK if you hadn't guessed already, I'm also interested in the railways.


 * The railways are a pretty big part of the UK, as many of us use them for commuting and leisure, so they tend to be In all the major news outlets, I tend to go for the local sections of the BBC. For example the source articles I used were from the Wales part of the BBC.


 * I do have a quick question for either of you. I did not honestly think my Welsh rail article would get so far. To what extent would you consider an article to be news worthy, especially on a global scale?


 * Thanks,
 * Dan23452767645 (talk) 22:08, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
 * It was worthy on global scale. :-) We only didn't fix the plagiarism issues raised by reviewer (Pi zero) quickly enough -- within maximum 2-3 days after the event occurred. (WN:Fresh) --Gryllida (chat) 22:33, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Re: follow-up
Hi Dan23452767645 :)

Happy New Year! How are you? To follow up on our writing earlier, you are welcome to sign up at User:Gryllida/welcome a bit if you like. I am simply looking for testers to check that the message delivery is working correctly. The end aim is to assist newcomers with writing their articles, but simply testing that the system works from technical perspective would be greatly appreciated.

--Gryllida (talk) 04:15, 8 March 2019 (UTC)

Re: welcome-a-bit
Hi Dan23452767645. :)

Thanks for signing up! I've set up the list page to get you started with the 'welcome-a-bit' message delivery. A few points: Cheers, --Gryllida (talk) 20:50, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Each line in this file includes a valid category name.
 * The script will see the list page automatically and start sending you messages.
 * This message delivery tool has bugs. They are best reported at its talk page, but I receive bugs anywhere -- by email or at my personal talk page -- and put them to this talk page. You get a small present for every bug reported. :)
 * If helping out newcomers, leave them messages on their personal talk pages (where they are easier to discover) or at article talk pages. As a personal recommendation, about 12-24 hours after they stop editing, or if they ask for help, start editing the article yourself.

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All 157 people die in Ethiopian Airlines crash
Hi. Taking a look at your article, I saw some updates would be needed for publication at this point. (That can happen; the story keeps developing and if we happen not to get it reviewed, it may lose freshness. Though of course the best solution in such a case would be if we did manage to get it reviewed lickety-split. :-)  I did my best to find other difficulties at the same time, so we wouldn't risk fixing problems one at a time and having to go all around the review cycle yet again for each one, which would be hopelessly inefficient. Please see my review comments. I didn't make very many edits to the article on this review, but, on general principles, do take a look at the . --Pi zero (talk) 20:32, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

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Re: welcome-a-bit (March)
Hi Dan23452767645

It has been several weeks after you signed up for the 'welcome a bit' notification. Does it work for you? Did it help you with editing new drafts? Do you wish to continue receiving the notifications?

This month I have identified a bug in DynamicPageList extension, which prevents me from excluding archived articles from the initial results. This has been addressed by suppressing the first notifications continue to work as expected.

I see you may have received some notifications twice, in the case when one article belongs to two categories which are interesting to you. I hope to fix this by the end of this month.

Do you have any suggestions for improvement? Thanks, --Gryllida (talk) 04:49, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

Re Soil from crash site to be given to the families of the 157 dead in Ethiopian Airlines crash
On March 17 the soil was given and burying completed:  Unfortunately a bit too old news for today... If there are any new updates such as identification is completed (in about six months, they say), it could be a good follow up.

In any case thank you for writing the story. I have not heard of such an occurrence before.

--Gryllida (talk) 20:19, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

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Re: welcome-a-bit (April): Version 3 released
Hi Dan23452767645

Version 3 of the welcome-a-bit tool has been released. Now to remove obsoleted notifications from your personal talk page, you can add importScript('User:Gryllida/js/wab-talk.js'); to Special:MyPage/common.js, and refresh your personal talk page. You will see a 'remove' button next to each section.

I saw you've blanked the list page, which unsubscribes you from all notifications. I am grateful to you for testing it out for several weeks. At your earliest convenience I would like to know why this occurred, and how the relevance of the new notifications could be improved to you or to others in the future. To reply please click here.

Have a wonderful day,

--Gryllida (talk) 00:03, 29 April 2019 (UTC)