User talk:EliseUOW

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Refugee Trafficking Crisis in Southeast Asia, a deadly journey.
Hello! I saw that you have submitted the article for review. There are few things I want to tell you. Please have a look at how to WN:WRITE an article. The welcome message on the top will guide you. 14.139.242.195 (talk) 05:27, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * First. The period isn't used in the headline. Please move the article to Refugee Trafficking Crisis in Southeast Asia, a deadly journey
 * Second. You have used only one source. We need at least two independent sources for the verifiability.
 * Third. The only source you have cited is dated October 21, 2015. This article appears to be WN:stale.
 * Fourth. The opening lines, or the WN:lede doesn't convey any message. Nor does the article follows a WN:inverted pyramid structure.
 * Fifth. I don't find any news in the article. It seems to be an essay and thus I am marking delete on the article.