User talk:Equator6th

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 22:20, 4 March 2019 (UTC)

Re: Google Censored China Search Engine Still Onging According to Google Employees
Hi Equator6th

Can you add the 5Ws and an H to the first paragraph? I think this is required for publication. I would be glad to help you with this, if you like.

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--Gryllida (talk) 00:21, 5 March 2019 (UTC)

Question
Hi Gryllida,

Thanks for helping me out with this! This is my first post. I just edited to cover the 5Ws and H. Could you read it over agian?

--Equator6th (talk) 02:04, 5 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I guess the next step is to lay it out in three separate paragraphs in this order (inverted pyramid):
 * 5Ws and an H (about the current recent event), followed by
 * more details, followed by
 * background
 * Could you please do that? If not, please let me know and I would be glad to assist.
 * To reply please click here . Gryllida (talk) 09:50, 5 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Could you please do that? If not, please let me know and I would be glad to assist.
 * To reply please click here . Gryllida (talk) 09:50, 5 March 2019 (UTC)
 * To reply please click here . Gryllida (talk) 09:50, 5 March 2019 (UTC)

Question
Hi Gryllida,

I tried making the 5H and W more desriptive.

I wasn't sure what to add in "More details followed by" and if what I have on "Background" is sufficient. But let me know if you can help in any other way.

I would love to learn and improve my writing skills so I can be a more active contributor to Wikipedia.

Thanks for your time.

--Equator6th (talk) 02:13, 6 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you, Equator6th. A few questions:
 * I guess the first paragraph is missing the day?
 * In what manner did they make the announcement? (the 'how') in the first paragraph
 * "Work on the censored search engine was said to have stopped" is passive voice. It is discouraged. Can you please write this paragraph with active voice instead?
 * Thanks. Please let me know if you would like any assistance.
 * To reply please click here . Gryllida (talk) 03:05, 6 March 2019 (UTC)
 * The first two points appear to be discussed at the article talk page, HERE. Gryllida (talk) 03:09, 6 March 2019 (UTC)
 * To reply please click here . Gryllida (talk) 03:05, 6 March 2019 (UTC)
 * The first two points appear to be discussed at the article talk page, HERE. Gryllida (talk) 03:09, 6 March 2019 (UTC)
 * The first two points appear to be discussed at the article talk page, HERE. Gryllida (talk) 03:09, 6 March 2019 (UTC)

RE: But I also got a notification saying, "This article requires pre-publication review by an uninvolved reviewer" Is this normal?
Yes this is normal, please wait several hours before a volunteer reviews the story and leaves their feedback. Please watch the article very closely, and if the reviewer says that more work needs to be done, please aim to complete it as soon as possible.

If there is anything that the reviewer asks to do that is confusing or unclear, please feel free to ask for help. Gryllida (talk) 00:11, 8 March 2019 (UTC)

Headline
Hi Equator6th :)

At this section I've started a discussion of the headline of the article. Perhaps you have some ideas how it can be improved.

--Gryllida (talk) 00:15, 8 March 2019 (UTC)

Development on Google's censored China search engine still ongoing according to Google employees
Hi. Please see my review comments. --Pi zero (talk) 13:20, 8 March 2019 (UTC)