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Tempodivalse [talk]  22:15, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

Wyoming boy leads police on chase
I have done a little work on this article you posted. I found the Denver Post source you mentioned when you created it and added that. Basically, I've done quite a bit of what the introduction above links to on how to make an article. I have then marked the article as developing, so you and other people get another chance to work on it before it is put up for review and publication.

There are a couple of problems that need cleared up though. I am not sure if the article is trying to say the chase started in one town and went to another - a "started at town A and ended at town B" way of explaining. The Indian reservation is mentioned as being 50 miles from somewhere. Is it 50 miles from the start of the chase, or 50 miles from the end of the chase? Did it start or end on the reservation, so it is important to mention the reservation. Or, was the boy they arrested from the reservation and it is mentioned because of that. If so, you also need to explain which of town A or B it is fifty miles from.

I am not sure that the sources give enough information to answer all these points and clear up the article for someone who might never have been to Wyoming, or even the United States. But, if you do sort that out and add details from local knowledge, can you put a note on the article's talk page to help other people check what you write? --Brian McNeil / talk 23:02, 2 October 2009 (UTC)