User talk:Findalini

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 05:08, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Pete Anderson appears on Cover It Magazine promo cover for Halloween launch
Hi. I've reviewed this article, and found it not-ready for publication in its current form. Please see my review comments. --Pi zero (talk) 22:34, 14 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Re-reviewed. Improved; some problems remain.  review comments.  --Pi zero (talk) 01:01, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
 * I've written another review. Tried to put things differently; I gather my explanations haven't been fully successful in explaining what the difficulties are, so I've tried to put things a big differently, hoping perhaps some things become clearer.  --Pi zero (talk) 23:51, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
 * And, another review. I'm really unsure how to feel about this; I fear for the fate of this particular article, and at the same time I hope you can learn as much as possible from this process.  It's not uncommon for a successful Wikinews contributor to have never managed to get their first article published (or even several of their first few articles; it varies widely, of course), but to have learned a great deal from the experience that helped with later articles.  --Pi zero (talk) 00:43, 16 October 2014 (UTC)