User talk:Gauravgaikwad2710

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 06:40, 19 March 2020 (UTC)

Help me
help me Article edit support of recently published article.
 * Hi, can you please be more specific about what exactly you have on your mind? •–• 09:31, 19 March 2020 (UTC)

I am taking in reference to this article https://en.wikinews.org/wiki/With_a_Rs_3.75_Cr_turnover,_Chinu_Kala_shows_what_it_takes_to_run_an_accessories_business Do review it and if there are some changes to do with it do tell me as I will do the needful, Thanks for your reply


 * Hi. I reviewed this article; please see my review comments. I recommend reading Pillars of writing, an overview of what we do here.  There is a good tutorial on writing a first article for Wikinews at Writing an article. Cheers! --Pi zero (talk) 12:59, 19 March 2020 (UTC)

I have made a lot of improvement and I strongly believe that this wikinews should be present which can motivate most of the women who want to dive in Entrepreneurship Gauravgaikwad2710 (talk) 13:59, 19 March 2020 (UTC)

Forgive me if I'm wrong.......
....but: Your Chinu Kala article just brims over with praise and adoration. This smells like a marketing thing to me and that generally doesn't fly well here (without serious full disclosure of such a relationship). I am sorry if I am mistaken. But: can you tell us more about 'Your Story'? --Bddpaux (talk) 16:10, 19 March 2020 (UTC)

Hello dear I was officially present at that event and had written key points from the interview, I thought I would empower other women by keeping this article feature here cause this is a story of women who left her home at teenage with ₹300 and now owns a company with a turnover of 13 crores

Have you read the full story ? Gauravgaikwad2710 (talk) 16:22, 19 March 2020 (UTC)
 * No, I have not:but, please see the reviewer's comments. To succeed here, one must be both humble while not being 'married' to their stories. This is a news site. We are journalists. One cannot get their feelings hurt easily and continue here. I have been around here for MANY years. This project can radically improve one's writing abilities, but you have to STICK WITH IT! Let me know if I can help in some way. --Bddpaux (talk) 17:18, 21 March 2020 (UTC)


 * This is an interview from 2018 we're talking about, is it not? That's too long ago in any case.  We also don't republish material from elsewhere, as such. Original reporting is a separate thing, on Wikinews.  Generally a reporter doesn't undertake it until after they've "learned the ropes" by writing synthesis articles here, and also they've earned a reputation here.  And there's extensive documentation required; you say you were present, but did you take notes, or some such, and if so, in what form? The tone is non-neutral.  Neutrality is a big deal here; see Neutrality. --Pi zero (talk) 16:56, 19 March 2020 (UTC)