User talk:Hes853uow

-- 01:54, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Australian Greens leader criticises media ethics
Some work done on this; I've switched most of the start to active voice. What, ideally, needs done to complete it is to make the quotes that are sort-of standalone flow. Hopefully the changes I've already made will give you some indication of how to resolve the last details around this. But, in general, I would strongly advise against a paragraph which is just a quote with "he said" tacked on the end. If it follows on from the prior paragraph, then segue to it as part of that paragraph. --Brian McNeil / talk 21:41, 2 September 2011 (UTC)

Wikimedians to the Games
Hi. :) As you're an Australian contributor, I thought you might be interested in Wikimedians to the Games, which is an opportunity to cover the Paralympic Games as a member of the press. As you've experience writing Wikinews articles, this should give you a leg up. :)  LauraHale (talk) 08:39, 31 December 2011 (UTC)