User talk:JLO-UOW

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 00:51, 7 March 2017 (UTC)

COI article
Hi. Just looking at your COI article, I note some difficulties. Those are just some thoughts. --Pi zero (talk) 03:36, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * We don't allow self-publication. Note the first pillar at WN:PILLARS.
 * The lede should briefly summarize the focal event by addressing (as meany as reasonably possible of) the five Ws and an H. It should, especially, show the focus satisfies our criteria for newsworthiness, including especially the day on which it occurred to verify freshness.  Here the focal event appears to be the publication of the follow-up report on possible COI, but that isn't mentioned in the lede at all.
 * There should be two mutually independent trust-worthy sources corroborating the focal event.
 * Wikilinks in the body of the article should use w.

Don't
You replaced a published article with a request to publish something. Do not ever do that. Published articles should not be modified very much at all, and only trivially beyond the 24-hour horizon past publication, like fixing misspellings and such. --Pi zero (talk) 03:28, 13 March 2017 (UTC)