User talk:JessDimUOW

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 05:16, 31 July 2013 (UTC)

Glasgow Para-Games to make history
Hi. I have left feedback for Glasgow Para-Games to make history at Talk:Glasgow Para-Games to make history. Please carefully consider this feedback and integrate it into the extensive article rewrite that will be required in order to get it published. Please clearly focus on a news event. If the problems are not fixed and quickly, then the review queue length means it will have a difficult time getting published on its second attempt. --LauraHale (talk) 07:03, 12 August 2013 (UTC)

Looking at articles from a reviewer perspective...


When I was doing reviews this morning, I screencast a number of them with the hope student contributors and other Wikinews reporters could see what reviewers are looking at and better understand some of what we are looking at. Hopefully you may find these helpful for understanding what we look for, bearing in mind that every reviewer does look at things slightly differently and no two reviews are the same.--LauraHale (talk) 12:17, 12 August 2013 (UTC)

NSW under fire‎
Hi. NSW under fire‎ is going to need a rename for two reasons. 1) It is an incomplete sentence. It should be a complete sentence. 2) It is not unique enough and is unclear. Titles should be unique and give a clear idea of what the article is about. New South Wales is under fire for what? The state government's policies on boat people? For its support of the Syrian regime? --LauraHale (talk) 10:24, 22 October 2013 (UTC)

Truckie article
(In the U.S., we call them 'truckers', but that's just us!!) You have an excellent start to what might be an interesting article....I'm going to try to nudge it along just a wee bit....stay with it!! --Bddpaux (talk) 22:26, 25 October 2013 (UTC)

Comments page
Hi. I copied your comments on comment pages to talk pages, as we do not allow comment pages on unpublished articles. --LauraHale (talk) 08:04, 27 October 2013 (UTC)

Your articles
Hi. Thanks for creating NSW under fire. Unfortunately, it has been deleted as an abandoned article. Not every article succeeds; we look forward to your continued contribution to Wikinews. Wikinews' content guide and guide to writing an article are useful resources for writers. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me or at the assistance page. This also includes NSW feeling the heat from bush fires which is now at User:JessDimUOW/NSW feeling the heat from bush fires. — Mike moral  ♪♫  01:51, 18 November 2013 (UTC)