User talk:KG4SGP

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 00:57, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

Israel sets 36 hour ultimatum for Hamas
Hi! Published, congratulations and thanks. Seems a very solid piece of work. A few things here and there. See the review comments, and. --Pi zero (talk) 16:16, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

Hey, and thanks! I really appreciate the encouragement! Hopefully as I get more into things I may be able to really streamline the reviewers process. It's got to get annoying when there's a lot of fact checking multiple sources with no idea where the fact is in the sources. Yeah I usually go back and see what the reviewers changed/edited.

Thanks again! KG4SGP (talk) 02:27, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

Agencies choose yearlong crew for International Space Station
Although I did pass this, the sourcing was pretty weak; it was close to being an echo of the press release. The Huffington Post source wasn't even drawn on for any information that wasn't in the press release; its only small contribution was to demonstration of newsworthiness. Preferably, although it'd be fine to use the press release as one source, one would also have a couple of mutually independent sources besides the press release, and would draw from each of them some info not in the press release.

Nice use of html comments, btw. :-)  --Pi zero (talk) 14:47, 27 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll keep the above in mind on future articles. I've tended to write short articles that mainly discuss the big points, and most of those were in the press release, but I probably should have gone into more fine detail and will in the future. Thanks for publishing!

KG4SGP (talk) 16:12, 27 November 2012 (UTC)