User talk:KJeffs

-- 03:36, 3 May 2011 (UTC)

Bad start to jumps racing carnival as horse dies at Warrnambool
Hi! I reviewed your article, and it had a few minor problems which prevent its being published. As this is your first article reviewed on en.WN I marked up all the issues I found in color, with what I found wrong (it shows up if you hover over the colored section.) Things which are red or blue prevent the article from being published; things which are yellow are second priority but still serious, things which are green are things I feel would improve the article but are not pass/fail.

When you go to make the corrections, just delete the html span tags (all the stuff inside &lt;span ...&gt; and &lt;/span&gt;) to remove my comments and the colors. -  Amgine | t 15:02, 5 May 2011 (UTC)