User talk:Marquis de Montcalm

Hi!
Hi, welcome to Wikinews and thanks for your contributions. Just as a note, I think you'd like to see For Wikipedians and Style guide. I should also note we do not use tags on Wikinews. Simple attribution in the prose to the person who said it is adequate. Happy editing, — Mike moral  ♪♫  23:55, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I reviewed another one; I'd like to note, it was completely rewritten. I highly suggest you do read WN:SG. — Mike moral  ♪♫  01:04, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * It appears you have a subscription to the WSJ, therefore I cannot review Toyota, Tesla to develop electric SUV. If you could, please send me the text of the article via email. Thank you, — Mike moral  ♪♫  01:27, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Quick note: I published both the Toyota one and Sudanese Army claims to have killed 300 Darfur rebels in clashes, which was much better in terms of style than the last ones&mdash;good work. Cheers, C628 (talk) 19:44, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

Factual disaster
Please see Talk:Car bomb in Ciudad Juárez, Mexico kills four. — Mike moral  ♪♫  00:25, 17 July 2010 (UTC)


 * More importantly, look at the amount of work you made/left for other contributors. It is very important that you familiarise yourself with the Style guide; It makes many references to important treatises on effective use of the English language. Personally, I recommend Strunk's The Elements of Style. The critical difference is, Wikinews uses downstyle for headlines. -- Brian McNeil (alt. account) /alt-talk &bull; main talk 01:29, 17 July 2010 (UTC)