User talk:Mastershake177

-- 00:57, 2 February 2012 (UTC)

Welcome!!!!
A profoundly astute first-article on the Playstation Vita submission! I didn't wholly agree with some things said about it's newsworthiness, but hey.....tomorrow's a new day, right? Wikinews is a good place and a good thing. Hang in there and let me know if I can help in any way!!! Bddpaux (talk) 04:05, 12 March 2012 (UTC)

News briefs: March 31, 2012
Hey there. You may have missed it, but I actually just finished checking the script right before you came along and added the review template. The current version is cleared for recording! :) Blood Red Sandman  (Talk)   (Contribs) 14:07, 31 March 2012 (UTC)

U.S. Coast Guard unleashes cannon fire on abandoned Japanese ship
Hi. I not-ready'd this article; it needs to be reorganized, as I tried to explain as best I could in the review comments.

You might (perhaps) find it helpful to take a look at style guide section WN:SG, and the two sections that immediately follow it. (Not that the whole style guide isn't a good read :-) There's also WN:Writing an article, and perhaps the (under-construction) WN:Article wizard. --Pi zero (talk) 02:33, 6 April 2012 (UTC)


 * I meant to congratulate you on publication of this, and (inevitably :-) also drop a pointer to the . (We have in mind eventually, if we can arrange it, to have customizable notes like this automatically distributed by the review gadget, whenever an article review is submitted.)  --Pi zero (talk) 22:48, 6 April 2012 (UTC)

Oil and gas production waste create problems for the United States
Looks like fairly ambitious OR. Cool. The presentation needs some work, I know. (What else may be needed, of course, I don't yet know. :-)

See review comments. --Pi zero (talk) 20:38, 21 April 2012 (UTC)


 * KILLER EFFORT! I MEAN THAT!! I did a few spots of cleanup here and there......still not sure if it's going to make it through review or not, but one stellar effort, for sure!! Bddpaux (talk) 00:26, 23 April 2012 (UTC)


 * QuoteLeft and QuoteRight are used in news for quotes that also occur in the article text. (This is different than the way Wikipedia uses them, I gather.)  I commented out the QuoteLeft, but it might indeed be better to add the quote into the article text.  --Pi zero (talk) 03:26, 23 April 2012 (UTC)

Thank you Bddpauxfor your words of encouragement. As for the article, is there something that I can do to get it past peer revision? I made changes today in an attempt to make all my information current and to have all the up-to-date information to inform readers. Mastershake177 (talk) April 25, 2012

Congratulations, I know you worked hard on that story! Good work, Crtew (talk) 21:27, 25 April 2012 (UTC)