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Peace Talks to Recommence Between Palestine and Israel, However Many are Sceptical
Hi. I have reviewed Peace Talks to Recommence Between Palestine and Israel, However Many are Sceptical and left feedback at Talk:Peace Talks to Recommence Between Palestine and Israel, However Many are Sceptical. Please address these points before resubmitting for review. The sooner these points are addressed, the sooner another reviewer can review it. If the changes are not made quickly, the article risks going stale and never being publishable. As this looks like your first attempt at submitting, do not worry if you "lose" the article. It normally takes new reporters two or three attempts before they understand the style guide and review requirements and get their article published. If you have any questions, please do contact myself or another reviewer and we can try to assist you. :) --LauraHale (talk) 08:34, 4 August 2013 (UTC)

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Just to repeat, there can be zero external links in the article text. is acceptable. Israel is acceptable. Israel is not. Beyond that, relative dating needs to be used. July 29 would be "Last Monday". In this case, "last Monday" means this is no longer news. The article needs a refocus on an event that took place in the past 48 hours. --LauraHale (talk) 05:43, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

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If you're a uow student, please put a student template on your user page, thus:

And feel free to fill in the missing field. --Pi zero (talk) 00:58, 26 August 2013 (UTC)

For starters.......
....don't get discouraged!! There's a bit of a learning curve here, so stay with it!! There really is a certain "rhythm" to reporting the news here. The two most critical are (IMO): Keep it fresh. Keep your sentences short. One of the most sinking feelings is, whenever you've worked real hard on an article, I mean, it's become your baby and then it goes stale and gets rejected.....that TRULY SUCKETH whenever that happens. You must remember, though: that's journalism. We're journalists. That's how it works. The standards are high here, and and they wont be lowered. Stay with it!!!! --Bddpaux (talk) 01:20, 10 September 2013 (UTC)