User talk:Mr awmorris

-- 01:21, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Welcome Mr awmorris
Thank you for your contribution to the article about National Human Trafficking Awareness Day! Crtew (talk) 03:10, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Norwegian mass murderer trial
Mr awmorris, Change the headline to describe the news event. The lead assumes the reader already knows what is happening. The story omits the context of the trial, such as it started Monday, etc. You also assume that people know or remember too many details about the murder. Use neutral language, even though it's a mass murder. You had some facts wrong, such as the trial is not broadcast on TV but in courts. Check again or copy vio.Crtew (talk) 04:45, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Norway
Your information is stale and no longer news. Update and give brief highlights from last week, and you may have a shot at publication.Crtew (talk) 14:38, 23 April 2012 (UTC)