User talk:Nautical78

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 02:52, 11 April 2013 (UTC)

Rehtaeh Parsons
Hi. I have reviewed Rehtaeh Parsons and left feedback at Talk:Rehtaeh Parsons. I would just highlight exactly what I told you on IRC: Please read our style guide, address the points on the talk page and then resubmit. --LauraHale (talk) 03:11, 11 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Wikinews =/= Wikipedia.
 * For Wikinews, the LAST paragraph that you have in your AfC draft would be the FIRST for Wikinews. Wikipedia: She was born. She went to school.  She was raped.  She died. Wikinews: She was raped.  The perpetuarators were not named or caught.  She later died.  She was born.
 * Wikipedia = Passive voice. Wikinews = Active voice.

Rehtaeh Parsons: Review part 2
Rehtaeh Parsons has been reviewed again. It needs to be renamed as the article is clearly not going to be about that person, but about events related to disclosure of who did things to her. Additional feedback has been left at Talk:Rehtaeh Parsons. Please read that feedback, and address all the points before resubmitting. If you do not understand a point, please ask so we can better explain. --LauraHale (talk) 03:34, 11 April 2013 (UTC)

I'm not sure on how to change the headline of the article. I want to change it to: "Canadian blogger calls on Anonymous to reveal deceased teen's alleged rapists"

Rehtaeh Parsons take 3
I have reviewed Rehtaeh Parsons and left additional feedback at Talk:Rehtaeh Parsons. Please do not resubmit before dealing with this feedback. The article will not get published unless there is a name change and the other issues are dealt with. Submitting without dealing with outstanding feedback is considered disruptive. --LauraHale (talk) 04:47, 11 April 2013 (UTC)