User talk:Ncdj181

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 18:38, 12 January 2013 (UTC)

Belfast protests leave 16 police officers injured
Hi. I reviewed Belfast protests leave 16 police officers injured. The article was marked not ready. The sources could be a little more clear as 1/13/2013 could be confusing. The lead needs to clearly identify when this event happened and where it happened. Did you know there is a Belfast in New Zealand? Not everyone will know this intrinsically that this is Northern Ireland so it needs to be more clearly stated in the first paragraph. The when is also fundamentally necessarily to establish newsworthiness. Added to that, a picture of some kind or an information box would be really, really nice to have. --LauraHale (talk) 20:37, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
 * An EXCELLENT effort, I might add.......back up, re-focus, take a deep breath and try again! Please don't run away mad. More specifically, please don't run away! --Bddpaux (talk) 20:06, 16 January 2013 (UTC)