User talk:NewSeren

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 17:27, 12 November 2014 (UTC)

New Harry Potter story written by J.K.Rowling
Hi. I reviewed your article; though it has a number of positive features and is in many ways better than many first attempts at a Wikinews article, the event it's about is from too long ago for a fresh publication &mdash; at the moment of publication, an article has to be about something that's just happened within the past day or two, three at most. See my review comments, and it's always a good idea to check the .

Writing for Wikinews generally gets a lot easier once one has all the basics down. It's not uncommon to stumble a bit on the first article or two. --Pi zero (talk) 20:42, 12 November 2014 (UTC)