User talk:Nzgabriel/Youth press gallery article

Minor details

 * International English spelling is centre, not center.
 * Last year it was debated that we should raise our driving age to be the same as some European countries, 18. Insert something, eg namely prior to the 18 to change it from a fragment into a sentence.
 * sever, small typo - should be severe.

Can you dig up the exact quote from Helen Clarke about the driving age? That'd be a nice addition. --Brian McNeil / talk 11:57, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Latest revision... "Government looked at rising" in last paragraph should probably be looked at raising. --Brian McNeil / talk 21:11, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your help, now I just need 100 more words to get across the 500 word minimum. --Nzgabriel | Talk 21:18, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

Should I tell them
Should I tell the Youth Parliament people that I got people on Wikinews (Brian McNeil) to look at my article for problems with it? --Nzgabriel | Talk 08:10, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Most of what I did you could have done yourself, for the spelling and grammar I pasted the article into MS Word and ran a check - otherwise I wouldn't have caught the sentence fragment.
 * You can perhaps point out that it was developed on the wiki and point to the user page, then the comments are here, the edit history is here, and anyone who wants to can assess exactly how much this is your own work (about 98-99%). --Brian McNeil / talk 09:17, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, I will think about it. --Nzgabriel | Talk 10:10, 23 March 2007 (UTC)