User talk:Omda4wady

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 10:10, 24 January 2013 (UTC)

Re president story
Gday

Thanks for sharing the story

I would like to ask for more information

1. When did this happen

State news announced on Tuesday

2. Where did it happen

Cairo?, Military hospital (according to al watan website(what is al watan? Why particularly in a military hospital?))

3. Why did the death occur

According to the guardian his family ssud hd was in intensive care for stomach tumour removal.

Official diagnosis??

4. How  did it happen ( in this case can be the same answer as the why )

Would be nice to cross check some of this with additional sources as sometimes existing reports are mistaken or misinformed.

Please let me know if you are looking for help with any of this or can not complete within the next two hours.

--Gryllida (talk) 21:41, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
 * No update?? What happened?
 * To leave a message just click edit at this section heading, type your text at the end and click Save Gryllida (talk) 06:42, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
 * No, it is not ready for publishing yet. Please see above. Do you have 15 minutes in your schedule for adding the missing information? Please let me know.
 * Thanks! Gryllida (talk) 07:04, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Expanded. Additional expansion to include the context of what happened in the 30 years would be great to have. The headline will need to be changed to remove the s using the 'rename' tab. Please check for grammar and quotes and re-submit when ready. Thanks. (I am heading offline for a few hours and your assistance would be greatly appreciated.) Gryllida (talk) 10:16, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --following my expansion, Pi zero has reviewed the story and published it. Review comments: link.
 * Please look at all changes. Click here and keep clicking "Newer edit" button at the right.
 * Thank you! Gryllida (talk) 04:09, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Please look at all changes. Click here and keep clicking "Newer edit" button at the right.
 * Thank you! Gryllida (talk) 04:09, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Gryllida (talk) 04:09, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Gryllida (talk) 04:09, 27 February 2020 (UTC)

Languages
What is your first language? How good is your English?

(To reply, please edit this section. Add your message at the end. )

Thank you. --Gryllida (talk) 13:21, 26 February 2020 (UTC)

My first language is Arabic, My English is good ( not very good) Omda4wady (talk) 13:25, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you, Omda4wady. :-)
 * My first language is Russian. I have been in Australia for ten years.
 * Please do not hesitate to write. Even if with mistakes. They will be corrected, and you will see these changes.
 * I learned much of my reading and writing here at Wikinews. :-)
 * Regards, Gryllida (talk) 13:36, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
 * I learned much of my reading and writing here at Wikinews. :-)
 * Regards, Gryllida (talk) 13:36, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Regards, Gryllida (talk) 13:36, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Regards, Gryllida (talk) 13:36, 26 February 2020 (UTC)

White Giraffes
An excellent start! ....but, unfortunately we require stories be relatively fresh. --Bddpaux (talk) 21:28, 17 March 2020 (UTC)

Thanks Omda4wady (talk) 06:17, 18 March 2020 (UTC)

Please put it on archives Omda4wady (talk) 06:17, 18 March 2020 (UTC)