User talk:Ps davidson

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 21:41, 1 December 2014 (UTC)

Trial for Texas lawyer accused of murder enters third day
I have reverted your &mdash; clearly well-intentioned &mdash; edits to this article on the basis they do not add value, or clarify, the story. It perhaps bears pointing out, "that" is a four-letter word; in most cases, it is needless verbiage.

The style in-which news is written is usually clipped, even terse at times. Having reverted to the prior sighted version, I still see at least one additional instance of "that" which could be removed.

Since rollback does not give an option to input an edit summary, I felt I should point out its use was not intended as any form of slight against your contributions. --Brian McNeil / talk 23:58, 4 December 2014 (UTC)

Grand jury decides not to indict officer for death of Eric Garner
Hi. I reviewed this, finding it not-ready for publication. See my review comments. It does generally take new arrivals at Wikinews a little while to get the hang of Wikinews writing. You might find WN:PILLARS of interest; and of course there's the Howdy template at the top of this page. --Pi zero (talk) 21:46, 9 December 2014 (UTC)