User talk:Ricmacas

Apple announces refreshed MacBook Air laptops, software updates at media event
Thanks for working on this! However, please try to talk more about newsy stuff, and less on technical numbers and whatnot. If you only mention all these numbers, they aren't extremely important and the article will seem like Apple advertising. Thanks!  — fetch · comms  19:43, 20 October 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm working on making the article more neutral; it reads sort of like a press release in certain spots right now. Also, be sure to read the style guide; I'm also working on fixing some minor stuff relating to that.  — fetch · comms  02:50, 21 October 2010 (UTC)