User talk:Saifullahrony

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 11:15, 3 March 2013 (UTC)

Integrating Floating Cage Aquageoponics System
Hi. On review of this article, I found it not-ready for publication in its current form. My review comments are here.

You may find WN:Pillars of Wikinews writing helpful as an overview of things here. There's also lots of useful stuff in the Howdy template at the top of this page. Feel free to ask questions. --Pi zero (talk) 16:10, 13 September 2014 (UTC)


 * Hi again.
 * I've re-reviewed the article. My review comments:  here.
 * The thing is, it doesn't seem to be a news article, so much as an encyclopedia article. It looks as if you may have tried to submit some of this material to a Wikipedia article and had it rejected as "self-promotion"; they have their own inclusion criteria over there, and tend to be quite demanding about material on a narrow topic.  We, on the other hand, have our own particular inclusion criteria, which are described at page WN:Newsworthiness.  In this case, I'm particularly not seeing a specific event; until one has that, one can't ask "is it relevant?", or "is it fresh?".  --Pi zero (talk) 18:46, 13 September 2014 (UTC)


 * As the above comments note, this is not news. That's for far more reasons than being written in the style of an encyclopedia entry, starting with the fact that all the sources you have cited are in-excess of a year old. Formatting the article into news-style would merely be an intellectual exercise without something current to use as the focus of what is news. --Brian McNeil / talk 09:20, 16 September 2014 (UTC)

Copied to Wikipedia

 * A Wikinewsie has copied a version of the article to Wikipedia; see Talk:Integrated floating cage aquageoponics system. --Pi zero (talk) 11:26, 16 September 2014 (UTC)