User talk:Uowstudent91

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17 year old boy jumps to death in Sydney
I have reviewed 17 year old boy jumps to death in Sydney and left feedback at Talk:17 year old boy jumps to death in Sydney. The article looks pretty good but needs some additional work. This could be done by making the lede shorter ad more concise while answering the main questions, or by seeing if you can separate the second paragraph into two paragraphs. I would also suggest looking at the way ages are formatted. (I cannot remember myself offhand and would need to consult the style guide.) Additional feedback left on the article talk page. --LauraHale (talk) 07:31, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Your article has been deleted as abandoned. It's been moved to User:Uowstudent91/17 year old boy jumps to death in Sydney for future reference. — Mike moral  ♪♫  08:42, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

User:Uowstudent91/Taylor Swift Lookalike Attack
Your article was deleted as abandoned. It has been moved to User:Uowstudent91/Taylor Swift Lookalike Attack for your future reference. — Mike moral  ♪♫  03:14, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

Erin Brady wins 2013 Miss USA contest
I renamed your article so it would have a news-style title. — Mike moral  ♪♫  06:42, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Hi. Thanks for creating Erin Brady wins 2013 Miss USA contest. Unfortunately, it has been deleted as an abandoned article. Not every article succeeds; we look forward to your continued contribution to Wikinews. Wikinews' content guide and guide to writing an article are useful resources for writers. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me or at the assistance page.   — Mike  moral  ♪♫  22:24, 28 June 2013 (UTC)

Rupert Murdoch files for divorce
Hi. Thanks for creating Rupert Murdoch files for divorce. Unfortunately, it has been deleted as an abandoned article. Not every article succeeds; we look forward to your continued contribution to Wikinews. Wikinews' content guide and guide to writing an article are useful resources for writers. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me or at the assistance page. — Mike moral  ♪♫  20:17, 28 June 2013 (UTC)