User talk:Wmjournalist

-- 03:24, 14 December 2011 (UTC)

For the first time, in Campus Martius, Detroit, giant Menorah Lighting
Hi. The article was not ready when reviewed &mdash; see the review comments at the article talk page. --Pi zero (talk) 04:57, 14 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Fresh review comments. --Pi zero (talk) 05:38, 14 December 2011 (UTC)

The article contains Original Reporting. 09:53, 14 December 2011 (PST) http://en.wikinews.org/wiki/Wikinews:OR


 * I'm going to try to write up a very different (and more in-depth) set of comments on the article talk page, to address issues that now seem relevant, knowing it's original reporting. --Pi zero (talk) 12:25, 14 December 2011 (UTC)


 * I have removed all of the "sources" added to this - two were blatant adverts, the third an utterly irrelevant link to something at least a month ago. Please do not try to get advert linkspam past Wikinews reviewers, nor assume we will not actually check cited sources. In its present form, this cannot be published as it lacks detailed original reporting notes on the talk page, and is not formatted according to the style guide. --Brian McNeil / talk 17:07, 14 December 2011 (UTC)


 * If you're interested in having this restored and moved to your user space, let us know. --Pi zero (talk) 12:53, 31 December 2011 (UTC)