User talk:Zizzu412

-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 16:20, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

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Congratulations on your first published article, Zizzu412!

Re: One dead, eleven injured in Minneapolis shooting
Hi Zizzu412

Two questions about this article.

1) There is a number of statements in the last two paragraphs whose source is unclear. I think they come from reports by other news orgs. Could they possibly please be be attributed?

2) An official police news item (twitter, press release, update on their official web site, and the like) could be great to have to include their perspective on what happened rather than re-reports of what the police said.

Regards, --Gryllida (talk) 05:09, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

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May I suggest to set a valid email for your account, at Special:Preferences. This would allow you to enable email notifications of new edits to your personal talk page, as well as new Echo messages such as highlights at article discussion pages, and article reviews. --Gryllida (talk) 06:12, 23 June 2020 (UTC)