Wikinews talk:Briefs/March 25, 2014

Comments by reviewer

 * The headline needs to be changed to something appropriate, and the format of the article content is messed up too; those things matter. I made a small change to facilitate checking the summaries, but lots more is needed.  Section headings (other than those I added).  There are even broken source links at the bottom.  There really should be a place for the audio file, with a red link since it hasn't been recorded yet.   Evidently this wasn't modeled on one of the published ones.  Granted, we don't yet have specialized infrastructure for creating these.  See News Briefs: February 28, 2014.
 * After tweaking the format enough that I could readily visit the source articles as I went, I started reading. But I didn't get far, because I hit what came across as a blatantly libelous assertion about the Westboro Baptist Church.  I removed that, but rewriting is needed.  Also, the "negative feedback from community members" seems unnecessary, the term "yet" is often biasing.
 * I've not checked facts elsewhere in detail, but I gave it all a quick skim, to see if I'd spot anything else similarly egregious.
 * The item on Gossow makes it sound like she'll have nothing to do with Arch Enemy hereafter, whereas she said she'd stay on to manage it (and other acts), so that felt odd to me.

The whole script still needs to be checked over before proceeding; please address the problems first. --Pi zero (talk) 11:48, 25 March 2014 (UTC)

Script review
I believe the current version of the script is acceptable. Note, one article has been published since the list of articles here was drawn up. --Pi zero (talk) 17:18, 25 March 2014 (UTC)

Hidden categories to add
Category:Jjbayes (Wikinewsie)‎ Category:Jnmornout (Wikinewsie)‎
 * ✅ --Pi zero (talk) 00:01, 10 April 2014 (UTC)