Wikinews talk:WikiBureau United States/Presidental candidate intro letter

Grammar?
The letter is indeed clearly written to spark interest and I think it will! Maybe we need to be a little more official... Oh and I don't understand this: 'We would love to send reporters and photographers to many of the stops your campaign to lead your party.'

--Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 09:16, 20 May 2007 (UTC)


 * How about "We'd love to send our reporters and/or photographers to as many of your campaign stops as possible."? --  Zanimum 00:26, 25 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Yes, better. Send away! --Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 11:42, 25 May 2007 (UTC)